Ok, I'm 24 and a freshmen in college and I am terrible at writing.
I have to write a one page 200+ word descriptive essay and describe in as much detail my next move in terms of education after attending this local community college I go to right now. Then I have to describe what specifics have contributed to my decision. I have no idea where to start or what to even say. Here is what I've said so far, can I build on it or should I start over? This is due monday so any amount of help is greatly appreciated. Thanks!!!
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It all started at the age of 14 when I first became fascinated and was able to purchase my first computer system. As a result I became allured in this particular area of technology.
Every day after class I would go home and immediately log onto the computer. Consciously ignoring my homework I was spending hours on end chatting, playing games and surfing the internet. At the same time I blankly performed many career planning assignments while in high school. Yet none of them seemed to point me in the path I was destined for.
Later on after graduating high school I realized how much of society is run by computers and realized how much I was amorously infatuated with these amazing machines. Until then I had no apprehension of what I wanted for a career.
I have to write a one page 200+ word descriptive essay and describe in as much detail my next move in terms of education after attending this local community college I go to right now. Then I have to describe what specifics have contributed to my decision. I have no idea where to start or what to even say. Here is what I've said so far, can I build on it or should I start over? This is due monday so any amount of help is greatly appreciated. Thanks!!!
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It all started at the age of 14 when I first became fascinated and was able to purchase my first computer system. As a result I became allured in this particular area of technology.
Every day after class I would go home and immediately log onto the computer. Consciously ignoring my homework I was spending hours on end chatting, playing games and surfing the internet. At the same time I blankly performed many career planning assignments while in high school. Yet none of them seemed to point me in the path I was destined for.
Later on after graduating high school I realized how much of society is run by computers and realized how much I was amorously infatuated with these amazing machines. Until then I had no apprehension of what I wanted for a career.