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Is there something you love, have to do, can't stop thinking about? Write about a personal passion or obsession other than visual art or design.
Looking Differently
One passion of mine is to look at the sky, examine it while it takes my burden away. Wherever I go, if I look outside the window, it will be there, surrounding me. Every day after school is the time I most appreciate doing this, sitting in the car with my host sister, driving back home, listening to music. That's the moment when you see all the dark naked and thin branches braided beautifully between each other countless times like cobwebs, covering a light yellowish illumination. The car moves, the branches intertwine even faster, but the sky still stays calm and soft behind it. I can't help that a smile of mine always appears on my face when I look up at it. The infinite sky makes me think of how wide and big the outside world is, and how much there is available to explore, while one is often focused in only a couple aspects of life, while some small issues can lock you up in your own little world ,and prevent you to look further.
I've been part of many communities. I've moved to different countries and learned new cultures. I had unforgettable memories, experiences and apprenticeships from all these places, but one thing that does not change and often makes me reflect back to those old days is the sky. Just like the love of God, infinite and unchangeable, one thing that never changes is that whenever I look at the sky, from wherever I am, it will always be the same one. While being the same sky, what amazes me the most is that it can express innumerable emotions. It can be fulfilled with stars, clouds, snow, rain, or even a beautiful fried egg with some ketchup and mustard. I am deeply thankful to God that he made this beautiful part of the nature free and see-able every single day.
I enjoy appreciating and looking at the stars and the moon. I am always amazed by thinking that every single light dot is actually another sun, another giant fire floating ball so far away from you that you can only see a soft light. I like to visualize the moon as another planet, and look at it really attentively so I can see the line where it turns darker and darker, to realize that it's actually three dimensional, not simply a smile of a scary cat in Alice in Wonderland.
Is there something you love, have to do, can't stop thinking about? Write about a personal passion or obsession other than visual art or design.
Looking Differently
One passion of mine is to look at the sky, examine it while it takes my burden away. Wherever I go, if I look outside the window, it will be there, surrounding me. Every day after school is the time I most appreciate doing this, sitting in the car with my host sister, driving back home, listening to music. That's the moment when you see all the dark naked and thin branches braided beautifully between each other countless times like cobwebs, covering a light yellowish illumination. The car moves, the branches intertwine even faster, but the sky still stays calm and soft behind it. I can't help that a smile of mine always appears on my face when I look up at it. The infinite sky makes me think of how wide and big the outside world is, and how much there is available to explore, while one is often focused in only a couple aspects of life, while some small issues can lock you up in your own little world ,and prevent you to look further.
I've been part of many communities. I've moved to different countries and learned new cultures. I had unforgettable memories, experiences and apprenticeships from all these places, but one thing that does not change and often makes me reflect back to those old days is the sky. Just like the love of God, infinite and unchangeable, one thing that never changes is that whenever I look at the sky, from wherever I am, it will always be the same one. While being the same sky, what amazes me the most is that it can express innumerable emotions. It can be fulfilled with stars, clouds, snow, rain, or even a beautiful fried egg with some ketchup and mustard. I am deeply thankful to God that he made this beautiful part of the nature free and see-able every single day.
I enjoy appreciating and looking at the stars and the moon. I am always amazed by thinking that every single light dot is actually another sun, another giant fire floating ball so far away from you that you can only see a soft light. I like to visualize the moon as another planet, and look at it really attentively so I can see the line where it turns darker and darker, to realize that it's actually three dimensional, not simply a smile of a scary cat in Alice in Wonderland.