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'my discovery of engineering' - upenn professor essay



sportsguy884 3 / 10  
Dec 30, 2008   #1
i may be the only one who has no idea about any professors that i want to study under

i was just wondering how other people applying to upenn came up with their ideas about their professors

JSnyder726 2 / 6  
Dec 30, 2008   #2
It helps to know what you want to do for undergrad. Then you can find that undergrad department, look through their faculty directory, and find a professor that teaches something you're partcularly interested in. Like, for my essay, I picked a professor who researches Personality Psychology and Personality Theory, because I want to study that realm of psychology. Something like that.
OP sportsguy884 3 / 10  
Dec 30, 2008   #3
but how did you know anything about the professor apart from just what they taught
JSnyder726 2 / 6  
Dec 30, 2008   #4
Most professors have pages. When you find them in the faculty directory there will be links to their pages. Sometimes it's a simple university provided thing with varying amounts of info, and sometimes they have their own pages entirely.
OP sportsguy884 3 / 10  
Dec 30, 2008   #6
penn professor short answer

Penn offers its undergraduates an eminent faculty and a wealth of research opportunities. Use the space below to name a Penn professor with whom you would like to study or conduct research and explain why. (1000 characters)

I have always had a passion for mathematics and I had recently gained one for physics. With my discovery of engineering I had found a way to combine them and use them in a productive way. The next step was to figure how exactly to use engineering to make a difference.

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hellomoto 3 / 10  
Dec 30, 2008   #7
try to slice a few superlatives and dont sound too obsessive
otherwise it was good. good specific jawn
hellomoto 3 / 10  
Dec 30, 2008   #9
hahaha
good specific references.
jawn can mean anything in this sense jawn=entire paragraph
but I liked the specifics
amy 5 / 39  
Dec 31, 2008   #11
Hey, I tried to help you out here:
Here's my revised version of your response. It's 3 in the morning, and I'm very tired, so, I'm really sorry if you don't like it.

Mathematics has always intrigued me, but I've recently cultivated a passion for phsyics as well. Fortunately, the field of engineering has permitted me to combine both subjects in a productive, dynamic way. But, how could I utilize the vast field of engineering in a distinctive way? Professor Vijay Kumar's Multiple Autonomous Robot Systems (MARS) project answered just that. Dr. Kumar's innovative, cutting-edge research attempts to explore the vast universe, and understand its roots. Merely the thought of witnessing this project, and potentially becoming a part of it amazes me.

To be one of the pioneers on such ground breaking research demonstrates Dr. Kumar's true genius. I can not wait to experience his class and to see his unique intellect come through in his teaching. The boundless knowledge he can equip me with is unimaginable, yet I am curious to find out. If my high school physics teacher inspired my current passion for engineering, I can not wait to see what a world-renowned Penn professor can do.
shayonsaleh 6 / 6  
Dec 31, 2008   #12
It was okay, and I liked the last sentence. It seemed kind of listlike with all the "I"s you put in. Also, you may want to be a little bit more specific with what class of the professor you are actually speaking of.

I like Amy's edit a lot better. I would use that.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Dec 31, 2008   #13
Mathematics has always intrigued me, but I've recently cultivated a passion for physics as well.

The field of engineering has permitted me to combine both subjects in a productive, dynamic way.

Dr. Kumar's innovative, cutting-edge research in exploring the vast universe, and understand its roots.

The mere thought of witnessing this project, and potentially becoming a part of it amazes me.

Good luck!

:)


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