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Do you consider yourself a person who would contribute to the diversity of the student body here? Please explain briefly (1000 characters or less).
Statistically, I offer little in diversity as it relates to a politically-correct sampling of various ethnicities, religions, sexualities, and socioeconomic groups. However, I have come to realize that true diversity is found through the invaluable sharing of various human experiences. It is through these experiences which makes each of us unique.
An aspect of my uniqueness is my empathy for others and innate ability to be disarming. I suppose I developed these traits having spent many years following my mother as she volunteered in nursing homes as a child and continued my volunteerism during high school and college.
Being able to interact with people in a way where they don't feel the need to be defensive fosters open engaging conversation. It is genuine and real. I often would be amazed at how strangers would just start talking to my mother as if they were life ling friends. Now, that same thing happens to me.
Do you consider yourself a person who would contribute to the diversity of the student body here? Please explain briefly (1000 characters or less).
Statistically, I offer little in diversity as it relates to a politically-correct sampling of various ethnicities, religions, sexualities, and socioeconomic groups. However, I have come to realize that true diversity is found through the invaluable sharing of various human experiences. It is through these experiences which makes each of us unique.
An aspect of my uniqueness is my empathy for others and innate ability to be disarming. I suppose I developed these traits having spent many years following my mother as she volunteered in nursing homes as a child and continued my volunteerism during high school and college.
Being able to interact with people in a way where they don't feel the need to be defensive fosters open engaging conversation. It is genuine and real. I often would be amazed at how strangers would just start talking to my mother as if they were life ling friends. Now, that same thing happens to me.
