Hey, guys! This is my supplement for BU--my safety school. But stil, I don't want to risk with a bad essay. So please critique as harsh as possible and I'll return the favor!
Combining an elite liberal arts education with the resources of a leading research university, located in the heart of a great city with ample prestigious internships and job opportunities, encouraging scholastic exploration through class discussions and tutorials-surely these are all highlights of Boston University. Nevertheless, as a fanatic of cross-cultural communication and ideas, I am most attracted by BU's diversity and global programs. With students from 50 US states and more than 100 countries, BU gathers talented students from all around the world and enables us to cultivate cosmopolitan perspectives and become global citizens. I have always enjoyed getting to know people from all cultures and backgrounds, and I am sure the diversity of BU shall grant me the precious opportunity to make friends with passionate, ambitious young scholars. In addition, BU is one of the few schools that provide numerous study abroad programs for science students. As a prospective chemistry major, I am excited to find out that I can choose to study in Auckland, Madrid, Dresden etc. I believe that my amiable, adaptable and perseverant personality coupled with my strong background in academics makes me an exemplary candidate to BU.
It is a great essay. I do not think you should change anything in it.
Especially i like this sentence :
"I believe that my amiable, adaptable and perseverant personality coupled with my strong background in academics makes me an exemplary candidate to BU."
You might include there some other things besides diversity maybe.
Good luck with your application.
If you have time please check out my BEREA application too , i will appreciate it .
