Drawings and Photographs; Rochester App/ Why Rochester?

I need to write a short answer based on the following prompt. 125 words or less. Can someone check my answer. I really appreciate it.
Why Rochester? - The University of Rochester is one of two universities listed by The Carnegie Foundation for the Advancement of Teaching as arts-and-science focused, medium-sized, and highly residential, with comprehensive PhD programs, medical schools, and very high research activity. Both offer undergraduates an unusual degree of freedom in their curriculum. Which of these characteristics (or others) are leading you to apply to Rochester?

I am a student artist looking forward to major in computer science. Art and science seem to be so distinct, but in my mind, they are united. I have talents and passions on both fields. The freedom in curriculum selection in the University of Rochester gives me opportunity to enrich myself in both areas. The GEAR program attracts me. It offers an intensive and accelerated program in Engineering. Rochester is also an ideal art school with remarkable museum and Studio Art program. On the other aspect, the whole campus is an art piece. I like the environment there. The first thing I will do there is to incorporate the beautiful scenery into my drawings and photographs.

"Art and science may seem to be so distinct, but in my mind, they are united. I have talents and passions on both fields."

"The freedom in curriculum selection in the University of Rochester's freedom in curriculum selection gives me the opportunity to enrich myself in both areas."

"The GEAR program attracts me as it offers an intensive and accelerated program in Engineering."
"On the other aspect, the whole campus is an art piece and I like the environment there."
Your answers the prompt accurately and you explained why you want to be in Rochester. However, I think you can improve more. Try to make the essay more interesting, make the readers curious or add a touch of humor.

I think at the beginning distinct is the wrong word, instead of something meang so defined choose a word with a meaning that they are different. Other than that I thought it was good!

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