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In no more than 250 words, please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission?
After first discovering BU, the urban campus and strong school spirit appealed to me. I had finally found the perfect balance between urban city life and active campus life. Most universities located in the city lack school spirit, and most universities in small towns have no major city nearby. BU is the perfect place that combines a major city rich with culture and opportunities with an active campus life. After finding out more about BU, I discovered its strong programs, emphasis on engaging with the community and diversity. These qualities are what sold me.
Coming from schools that required me to apply what I learned in the classroom through various projects and activities, I am attracted to the practical opportunities and programs BU offers its students. I've always believed that the only way someone can use the knowledge from their courses in the future is if they apply it as they're learning. As BU is a pioneer of student research, study abroad and internship programs, I feel it is a good fit for me. I plan to take advantage of such opportunities at BU so I can extend my learning and become better prepared for the workplace.
Additionally, BU's values of inclusiveness and engagement with the community align with my own. I've always been a tolerant person that treats everyone I meet equally, and I work hard not to let stereotypes dictate what I think of others. For these reasons, BU is my dream school, and I'm looking forward to being an active student in its community.
In no more than 250 words, please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission?
After first discovering BU, the urban campus and strong school spirit appealed to me. I had finally found the perfect balance between urban city life and active campus life. Most universities located in the city lack school spirit, and most universities in small towns have no major city nearby. BU is the perfect place that combines a major city rich with culture and opportunities with an active campus life. After finding out more about BU, I discovered its strong programs, emphasis on engaging with the community and diversity. These qualities are what sold me.
Coming from schools that required me to apply what I learned in the classroom through various projects and activities, I am attracted to the practical opportunities and programs BU offers its students. I've always believed that the only way someone can use the knowledge from their courses in the future is if they apply it as they're learning. As BU is a pioneer of student research, study abroad and internship programs, I feel it is a good fit for me. I plan to take advantage of such opportunities at BU so I can extend my learning and become better prepared for the workplace.
Additionally, BU's values of inclusiveness and engagement with the community align with my own. I've always been a tolerant person that treats everyone I meet equally, and I work hard not to let stereotypes dictate what I think of others. For these reasons, BU is my dream school, and I'm looking forward to being an active student in its community.