PROMPT: Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you. (250 words)
The summer before freshmen year, I was given the opportunity to restore an orphanage in Nicaragua, a third world country.
I had to adjust to the settings of not having air conditioning, sleeping on thin mattresses on the floor, eating unpleasant food, taking cold showers, and risking the chance of catching a virus. I thought that when I meet the children, they would look like the kids in commercials, crying because I would have. These are children that wear the same clothes everyday because they have no other option. They had no toys but each other to play with. They were left abandoned, and have no chance of becoming adopted because the paperwork is complicated, yet they radiate smiles and laughter.
When I came home from my trip, a few weeks later my parents were separated. Although, it was the hardest misfortune I had to accept, I was grateful and reminded myself of blessings that I have. My parents are alive, I have brothers and a sister to share memories with, and I have a home and food to eat. When my life doesn't turn out the way I want it to, instead of asking why, under the circumstance that an event happened out of my hands, I do not seek to see the bigger picture, but I have faith that it will reveal in its own time. Remembering the humbleness of the children, I know that I can face every challenge by embracing life and not battling it.
PLEASE: Should I take anything out? What words do I need better vocabulary? Do I capture the essence of the prompt, or do I lose focus?
The summer before freshmen year, I was given the opportunity to restore an orphanage in Nicaragua, a third world country.
I had to adjust to the settings of not having air conditioning, sleeping on thin mattresses on the floor, eating unpleasant food, taking cold showers, and risking the chance of catching a virus. I thought that when I meet the children, they would look like the kids in commercials, crying because I would have. These are children that wear the same clothes everyday because they have no other option. They had no toys but each other to play with. They were left abandoned, and have no chance of becoming adopted because the paperwork is complicated, yet they radiate smiles and laughter.
When I came home from my trip, a few weeks later my parents were separated. Although, it was the hardest misfortune I had to accept, I was grateful and reminded myself of blessings that I have. My parents are alive, I have brothers and a sister to share memories with, and I have a home and food to eat. When my life doesn't turn out the way I want it to, instead of asking why, under the circumstance that an event happened out of my hands, I do not seek to see the bigger picture, but I have faith that it will reveal in its own time. Remembering the humbleness of the children, I know that I can face every challenge by embracing life and not battling it.
PLEASE: Should I take anything out? What words do I need better vocabulary? Do I capture the essence of the prompt, or do I lose focus?