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I have always enjoyed being faced with new challenges that put me outside of my comfort zone



jlondon 1 / 1  
Jan 6, 2015   #1
Much of the work that students do at Emerson College is a form of storytelling. If you were to write the story of your life until now, what would you title it and why?(100-200 words).

Growing up in a seemingly predictable suburban county, I have always enjoyed being faced with new challenges that put me outside of my comfort zone. Many of the challenges in my life involve change. Whether it be through a new hair color or my parents' divorce, in one way or another my life is constantly changing. Though I am not always comfortable with certain life changes I know I have to make the best out of it.

With a never ending changing life, I like to compare my comfort zone to the symbolic box that I am so desperately trying to think outside of. Therefore when I am thinking outside of the box, I am also outside of my comfort zone. With that said I would title my life so far: "Out of the Box".

(I feel like this is not that good and I would love to hear feedback from others.)

SherlockLegends 2 / 6  
Jan 6, 2015   #2
It seems like it's already well written. You answered the prompt with a great title and supported it. Although, since you are still doubting it, why don't you beef it up by adding more connection and anecdote. For me, the whole "comfort zone" and "challenges" are cliche and everybody uses it, so make your essay more out of the box and add more life into it. I am aware of the word count, so probably 2-3 more sentences can do. Let your essay be one of the kind from others.


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