Hi there!
I am international student and prepare for U.S college transfer now.
This is my extracurricular activity essay on common app.
Please read this and points out mistakes or more better revisions.
Thanks.
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Last two years, I always become nervous and proud myself when our newspaper is printed from print center, for I had taken a charge of editor in university press. From subject of articles to trivial typo mistakes, all of criticisms, admonitions and commendations point to me and I have to take a responsibility to the results. Having a responsibility for university newspaper helps me to be mature mentally and to grow into exemplary adults. And it was precious and valuable experiences to have opportunities to write articles about business and economics sections, related to my economics major. When I wrote about current political and economic issues, I felt like I became an economic expert. Also, when I wrote columns about social issues and matters, I felt like I became famous and personally favorite columnists, Paul Krugman and Christopher Hitchens. I have no doubt that these experiences will act as a catalyst to study major and inspire my future career.
I am international student and prepare for U.S college transfer now.
This is my extracurricular activity essay on common app.
Please read this and points out mistakes or more better revisions.
Thanks.
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Last two years, I always become nervous and proud myself when our newspaper is printed from print center, for I had taken a charge of editor in university press. From subject of articles to trivial typo mistakes, all of criticisms, admonitions and commendations point to me and I have to take a responsibility to the results. Having a responsibility for university newspaper helps me to be mature mentally and to grow into exemplary adults. And it was precious and valuable experiences to have opportunities to write articles about business and economics sections, related to my economics major. When I wrote about current political and economic issues, I felt like I became an economic expert. Also, when I wrote columns about social issues and matters, I felt like I became famous and personally favorite columnists, Paul Krugman and Christopher Hitchens. I have no doubt that these experiences will act as a catalyst to study major and inspire my future career.