Why am I interested in rowing?
What have I gained from rowing/ what values & principles have you obtained?
Why do I enjoy doing it?
I have found my persistent mentality has made me a good oarsman. It takes a lot of courage to cope with the intensity of training, though no matter how strenuous it gets, I am prepared to tackle it with the utmost effort in my desire to win. I am motivated in hard times in knowing that in order to win I have to battle through. In developing this attitude I have become a better student: I do well in exams due to my academic dexterity. Rowing has made me value teamwork, as in order for us to be successful we have to commit ourselves as one to training. I enjoy this because I do it with my closest friends; the people I have come to trust most in my life as they experience the same pains and joys of training and competing, in order to be successful. As Captain of the rowing team, I suit my leadership role because I motivate team ethics and handle my responsibilities to a high standard. I help teammates through difficulties, encourage hard work and try to be an inspirational example.
Do people reckon that this is ticking the right boxes for what is required in this short essay?
What have I gained from rowing/ what values & principles have you obtained?
Why do I enjoy doing it?
I have found my persistent mentality has made me a good oarsman. It takes a lot of courage to cope with the intensity of training, though no matter how strenuous it gets, I am prepared to tackle it with the utmost effort in my desire to win. I am motivated in hard times in knowing that in order to win I have to battle through. In developing this attitude I have become a better student: I do well in exams due to my academic dexterity. Rowing has made me value teamwork, as in order for us to be successful we have to commit ourselves as one to training. I enjoy this because I do it with my closest friends; the people I have come to trust most in my life as they experience the same pains and joys of training and competing, in order to be successful. As Captain of the rowing team, I suit my leadership role because I motivate team ethics and handle my responsibilities to a high standard. I help teammates through difficulties, encourage hard work and try to be an inspirational example.
Do people reckon that this is ticking the right boxes for what is required in this short essay?