The person I'm close to the most is my friend. Her name is Thuong. We have known each other since I was in grade 7.
To me, she is really special girl. Not only does she has a good appearance, she also has a good personality. She is cute and pretty. She has long black hair, a round face and a straight nose. Especially, she has a charming smile with two dimples, which made a strong impression on me at the first time I met her. However, the thing that makes everybody like her the most is her personality. She is very modest. She's one of the best pupil in my class. She's good at every subject, but she never showed pride in her abilities and always tried to learn harder. Besides, she's always ready to help her friends in their study. That's why many people in my class cherished her. Furthermore, she is very warm-hearted, friendly and sociable. She likes to make friend with everybody and takes part in the society organizes. As a matter of fact, she became a student of the medical university now. Moreover, to me, she is a great friend who always knows how to take care and share. Whenever I'm sad or cheerful, happy or in sorrow, she's always next to me to share with me. Sometimes, I get into trouble, which makes me tired ,worried and discouraged, she is always willing to come beside me, help me calm down, give me helpful advice so that I can come over. Not only that, she is very reliable, I can share her my secrets without a bit worries. She is really a person who always listens to me, understands me every time and every where. That's why she became my close friend. I always feel proud because of having a great friend likes her on my side.
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this is the first time I post my essay on this web. Therefore,I feel not really self-confident.I hope I can receive your help. Can you check it for me, please!
To me, she is really special girl. Not only does she has a good appearance, she also has a good personality. She is cute and pretty. She has long black hair, a round face and a straight nose. Especially, she has a charming smile with two dimples, which made a strong impression on me at the first time I met her. However, the thing that makes everybody like her the most is her personality. She is very modest. She's one of the best pupil in my class. She's good at every subject, but she never showed pride in her abilities and always tried to learn harder. Besides, she's always ready to help her friends in their study. That's why many people in my class cherished her. Furthermore, she is very warm-hearted, friendly and sociable. She likes to make friend with everybody and takes part in the society organizes. As a matter of fact, she became a student of the medical university now. Moreover, to me, she is a great friend who always knows how to take care and share. Whenever I'm sad or cheerful, happy or in sorrow, she's always next to me to share with me. Sometimes, I get into trouble, which makes me tired ,worried and discouraged, she is always willing to come beside me, help me calm down, give me helpful advice so that I can come over. Not only that, she is very reliable, I can share her my secrets without a bit worries. She is really a person who always listens to me, understands me every time and every where. That's why she became my close friend. I always feel proud because of having a great friend likes her on my side.
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this is the first time I post my essay on this web. Therefore,I feel not really self-confident.I hope I can receive your help. Can you check it for me, please!
