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Friendship: Is It Really THAT IMPORTANT? - UBC Personal Profile



Eleana 2 / 4  
Feb 15, 2025   #1
What's important to you? Why? (maximum 1,500 characters)

"Please form groups to complete the task," said my English teacher one day. While my classmates were busy setting up their teams, no one asked me to join. "Again? This is the fourth time I've been left out," I thought, and I ended up joining the leftover friends as if nothing had happened. That night, I couldn't hide my disappointment and called my best friend, Gizelle. "It's okay. I know how you feel," she said. Her simple words made me cry yet gave me relief. She even told me to reflect on whether I had made any mistakes. My other close friends also comforted me, which made me feel motivated to take action. After that, I talked to my parents who supported me, and discussed it with the class supervisor.

As time went by, I realized it was just a misunderstanding. Back then, I spent most of my break time or time after school ended with close friends from another class. However, I had never made an effort to socialize with my classmates and only focused on Q&A sessions with my teacher during lessons. Because of my close friends' support, I finally found the courage to resolve the problem by becoming more outgoing and helping others. After seven months, I've built a strong relationship with my peers and no longer struggle with joining teams for school assignments.

Like Gizelle, who always supports me in every situation and advises me when I'm wrong, I believe true communication and balanced friendships not only comfort me but also help me grow and connect with others.

*My essay contains 1,490 characters
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15603  
Feb 15, 2025   #2
The essay does not come off as explaining why friendship is important to you. Instead, it reflects that communication is something that you learned to cherish and value due to the need for friendships. It would probably be best if you revised the essay to explain how you consider communication as an important factor in establishing and nurturing friendships. That way you can still use the information you provided in this essay, while refocusing the content on more a more relevant topic response. You could explain why you believe that communication in the context of friendship is valuable and use the story here as the example for that. That way you hit 2 birds with one stone. You get to show why you value communication and friendship within a related explanation.


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