hey everyone. this is my why rhodes supplement. Please help me with any suggestions or criticisms and also the word limit. everything is appreciated. help me and i will help you. thanks.
The view as I might one day sit in one of the gardens at Rhodes, I can imagine, will be mesmerizing. The leaves falling, colors everywhere, the stone buildings, and long lanes of grass- just the mere thought of it excites me. Rhodes is one of the few colleges that meets most of my requirements. It has a unique molecular biology major and provides me with research opportunities through which I can prepare for my career earlier in life. The diverse student body gives me a chance to meet people from different cultures and learn about them while sharing my own culture with them. The 10:1 student to faculty ratio allows me to have adequate interaction with the teacher to learn effectively. But the most inviting part for me is the kind of environment I might be surrounded with.
Raised in a crowded city where all forms of pollution take away the last ounce of serenity left within you, I have always wanted to live in a place where I would be able to simply look around me and feel fresh and tranquil. Rhodes offers me exactly that. The beauty of the Rhodes surroundings can help me find peace in my mind. The stone buildings reflecting the ancient American architecture will help me adapt to a new environment swiftly and will allow my fascination of ancient objects to flourish. The small but diverse community will allow me to be a part of a closely knit family where I know everyone and everyone knows me. I believe that what is around me can truly inspire me and at Rhodes, I will be inspired in every way to thrive and excel for the next four years.
The view as I might one day sit in one of the gardens at Rhodes, I can imagine, will be mesmerizing. The leaves falling, colors everywhere, the stone buildings, and long lanes of grass- just the mere thought of it excites me. Rhodes is one of the few colleges that meets most of my requirements. It has a unique molecular biology major and provides me with research opportunities through which I can prepare for my career earlier in life. The diverse student body gives me a chance to meet people from different cultures and learn about them while sharing my own culture with them. The 10:1 student to faculty ratio allows me to have adequate interaction with the teacher to learn effectively. But the most inviting part for me is the kind of environment I might be surrounded with.
Raised in a crowded city where all forms of pollution take away the last ounce of serenity left within you, I have always wanted to live in a place where I would be able to simply look around me and feel fresh and tranquil. Rhodes offers me exactly that. The beauty of the Rhodes surroundings can help me find peace in my mind. The stone buildings reflecting the ancient American architecture will help me adapt to a new environment swiftly and will allow my fascination of ancient objects to flourish. The small but diverse community will allow me to be a part of a closely knit family where I know everyone and everyone knows me. I believe that what is around me can truly inspire me and at Rhodes, I will be inspired in every way to thrive and excel for the next four years.
