Give us an example of how the pandemic has changed your involvement in the community or group- UBC

Impact of the pandemic

I became addicted to YouTube at the start of this pandemic, which made me lethargic and bored. I suddenly became depressed after reading numerous news reports about people who were stranded far from their homes. From my vantage point, the world had completely changed. There was hardly any communication between my neighbourhood and the NGO in 2020. We got to know one another online. When the second wave of the pandemic emerged in India, COVID struck me hard. Those 14 days of isolation made me appreciate my family and online interactions.The lethal stroke shocked everyone. But everything are back on track now. We are now able to interact physically. My NGO's objectives were revised to include not only financial assistance for orphans but also online tutoring, laptop purchases for kids, etc. I expressed thanks to God for enabling us to help 87 orphan pupils by providing them with 3 laptops and a projector for their classes. I was elated by the pandemic. We gained a lot of virtual learning and teaching experience thanks to the pandemic. I've learned from COVID how important it is to have relatives around when dealing with unforeseen circumstances.

The essay is not well thought out by the applicant. As an overall presentation, it is disconnected and uses unfounded reference points in certain aspects. The writer suddenly mentioned that someone had a stroke, without clarifying who it was an how it affected the community. What NGO? What was the applicant's role? How did the NGO function for 2 years? This is a very scatterbrained essay that seems more like the author thinking out loud or just outlining what he wants to say. He has not managed to make any sense in this presentation. He did not make an effort to review it for thought clarity and discussion relevance. Unless this type of writing makes sense in his native language, which I doubt as well. He has to rewrite this essay, this time paying attention to the development of the presentation through discussion clarity.