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'giving 110% to whatever I'm passionate about' Personal Statement for Radford university



fortee40 1 / 1  
Jan 25, 2014   #1
To be honest I don't know what to write in my personal statement. I don't have a mile long list of accomplishments let alone three. I've never been interested in sports, never taken part in various school clubs and other activities outside of the curriculum.

When people start high school they're usually so excited. They can't wait to experience everything that comes with being in high school, I mean who wouldn't? Everyone says that high school is the best four years of your life.My Freshman year I didn't know a soul. I was very shy and I tried my hardest to stay away from big groups and school clubs.Only doing the minimum amount that was required of me . I started off senior year l with a horrible attitude because I moved from Pittsburgh to Delaware. I didn't have any friends and I didn't join any clubs or volunteer anywhere. Looking back now I regret not trying my hardest and being such an introvert . I know my grades show that Im average and may not be able to take college life but I know in my heart that if Im accepted to Radford that I will be the person that Im supposed to be and I will excel in academics.

One thing im proud of myself for doing was participating in a chemistry program. For 10 weeks in the summer of my tenth frade year I was in Project SEED acs at Duquesne University . My project was Pigment Extraction and Separation Using Thin Layer Chromatography.It was a wonderful experience and it influenced my choice in majoring in Physical therapy. No matter what kind of science subject it automatically interests me .

When I think of my future, I'm terrified and eager, but I'm more ready than ever to take a leap of faith. I'm aware that I am not the "perfect," student, but throughout my life, I've never stopped giving 110% to whatever I'm passionate about.

Can you guys plz help me Any advice you have will be great!!!!!

duogduog 1 / 2  
Jan 26, 2014   #2
I thought it was too much of you being negative during high school. The latter part will be much better if you added a circumstance (for eg the chemistry club), which you did and then elaborate on how much you had changed after such a life-changing experience.

Use specific storytelling pieces to unravel yourself to the Adcom, not just promises. Hope this helps!


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