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As I watched my first K-drama in high school, I never imagined it would spark a journey to pursue my dreams in Korea. But that's exactly what happened. My fascination with Korean culture grew into a passion, driving me to explore opportunities to study abroad.
Coming from a low-income family of 5 children with both parent never attending university and limited financial resources, gaining a scholarship to study abroad was the only way to relieve my family of financial burden whilst gaining effective education. Studying in Korea has always been one of my dreams since the beginning of high school and it turned from a mere dream into plan as I was nearing my high school graduation.
One moment stands out in my memory which was me discovering that the little Samsung phone in my hand and LG TV in my home were all made in Korea. I felt an unexpected surge of joy and pride, realizing that a country I had barely heard of was creating innovative products that reached my small corner of the world. This spark ignited a desire to learn more about Korea and its culture. Back then my knowledge of Korea was limited to dramas that I got to watch along with my friends and some kpop bands I had come across.
I was deeply motivated by the prospects of learning Korean rich culture. The GKS gives me the opportunity to have life-long relationships and experience with friendly Korean people. This is a chance for me to understand and live the Korean culture of globalism and future development and I have chosen Korea because it is the destination for innovation, technology and tourism.
My academic excellence began early, as I consistently excelled in competitions and academics from primary school maintaining top position throughout making me the best graduating student that year. My hard work earned me a straight merit pass to my high school, where I continued to thrive. I was always driven to succeed, and my passion for learning only grew Stronger
In high and middle school, I excelled in my class, consistently ranking among the top 10% of the students. My passion for Artificial intelligence/engineering led me to join the robotics team and club called the 'XXX' - a nationally recognized club whose aim is to program robots to perform certain tasks. I developed hands-on experience and collaborated with like-minded individuals. Our team's achievements, including participating in the nation-wide competition called the 'XXX and winning several scholarships, further fueled my enthusiasm for the field.
I have also won awards and laurels such as bronze medal American mathematics Olympiad, Man Mathematics Competition at the State level 28th overall which has proved my critical thinking skills apart from others and also was a beneficiary of the prestigious Stanbic IBTC scholarship, which supported my academic pursuit.
Beyond academics, I honed my leadership skills by leading four clubs in my high school: the Math Club, Band Club, and Sea-hub and Drama Club. I successfully organized events, managed teams, and mentored members, developing strong communication and problem-solving skills. Participating in several inter and intra-school debates and competitions, refining my public speaking, critical thinking, and argumentation skills. These experiences taught me the value of effective communication, teamwork, and adaptability.
My interest in artificial intelligence started as a young girl with an elder brother who loved watching sci-fi movies. I was amazed at their speed of reasoning and ability to develop human-like machines and robots that help improve human living. The idea that a robot can learn and imitate human actions is an incredible phenomenon that has the potential to transform our lives. Curiosity turned into interest and interest into passion. I studied my mathematics and science related subjects like I was obsessed. Although I saw good results, it was never enough for me as opportunities and resources where limited and at most times inaccessible. But just like Franklin Roosevelt who has been a source of motivation said, "The only limits to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today", I decided to apply for this GKS.
Korea's reputation as a hub for IT and tech innovation resonates deeply, from robots serving and distributing foods to customers in a restaurant to paying your bus fee with the just a snap scan of your credit card at any time, I became determined to contribute to this field. After my high school while waiting for GKS scholarship, I enrolled at a computer institute on web designing in my area. A six months program which has honed my computer vision skills.I researched universities, as well as Korea's education system, although very strict but still was impressed by their esteemed engineering and IT programs. I realized that the GKS scholarship was the key to making my dream a reality. With the support of GKS scholarship program, I am confident that I can overcome financial obstacles and focus fully on my academic and professional development to the AI and software engineering world.
As my desired major is software engineering/Artificial Intelligence, I'm excited to apply for this GKS scholarship to Korea Universities renowned for their reputation for innovative research in engineering and AI programs and state-of-the-art facilities. Universities in Korea, with its supportive environment and resources for international students, will empower me to achieve my academic and professional goals, enhancing international collaboration and networking opportunities.
Although my parents were skeptical, due to the cost and expense of the whole application process coupled with the fact that that possibility of being selected was low, I convinced them to support my goal. I enrolled in an online Korean language program at King Sejong Institute and practiced Korean language speaking through Kdrama, k-variety shows and several language learning and exchange apps like Duolingo and Cake. I immersed myself in Korean culture, eager to prepare for my future.
Through this journey, I've developed a unique blend of computer expertise, mathematical skills, Korean language proficiency, and leadership abilities. I'm confident that studying in Korea will empower me to innovate and make a meaningful impact. I'm excited to contribute to and learn from the vibrant academic community in Korea.
Holt Educational Consultant - / 15168 both parent
Both indicates a plural form of a word. So you have to use the plural form of the word parent.
As I watched my first K-drama in high school
This may have been the way you were introduced to AKorea but the reviewers actually frown upon and dislike applicants whose most memorable reason for applying for a Korean scholarship, or coming to admire Korea came from K-Pop or K-Novela exposure. The Korean Wave in entertainment should not be mentioned so early in the essay. In fact, you should avoid mentioning that if you have a better reason to refer to.
My passion for Artificial intelligence/engineering l
My interest in artificial intelligence started as a young girl
Do not separate these 2 references. These should be merged as the reason for your interest in Artificial Intelligence. When put together, your application becomes stronger
