what would you want your roommate--and us--to know about you? tell us something so we can know you better.
(250-1800 char)
Some things have changed since that happy memory. I have now learned that the proper time to step on each pad is when the arrow moves up to the top of the screen, rather than the bottom, which my friends were so kind in pointing out. I have also realized that returning to the center after each move can be disastrous to one's health, and it is best if avoided. Yet one thing hasn't changed, and that is my unique ability to laugh at myself. Interweaving this philosophy into my daily adventures, I have found that life is too short to live without a little self-inflicted humor from time to time. It enhances our lives by eliminating anxiety and allowing growth, for we will always be our fiercest critics.
Perhaps my recent 215 combo is a testament that dancing may not be impossible for me.
[1549 char]
Comments: I don't really like the last two sentences. Any suggestions?
Note: I want to keep the sarcastic tone in the last paragraph, and keep it light and funny, and "not bitter" throughout.
And of course, please critique, rip it apart, whatever you'd like. Thanks in advance! :)
(250-1800 char)
Some things have changed since that happy memory. I have now learned that the proper time to step on each pad is when the arrow moves up to the top of the screen, rather than the bottom, which my friends were so kind in pointing out. I have also realized that returning to the center after each move can be disastrous to one's health, and it is best if avoided. Yet one thing hasn't changed, and that is my unique ability to laugh at myself. Interweaving this philosophy into my daily adventures, I have found that life is too short to live without a little self-inflicted humor from time to time. It enhances our lives by eliminating anxiety and allowing growth, for we will always be our fiercest critics.
Perhaps my recent 215 combo is a testament that dancing may not be impossible for me.
[1549 char]
Comments: I don't really like the last two sentences. Any suggestions?
Note: I want to keep the sarcastic tone in the last paragraph, and keep it light and funny, and "not bitter" throughout.
And of course, please critique, rip it apart, whatever you'd like. Thanks in advance! :)