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"The gym; Herndon Basketball" - Expand on extracurricular activity (150 words)



rajsmooth23 3 / 3  
Dec 25, 2010   #1
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (150 words or fewer, 1000 character maximum).

-The gym goes dark as the lights shut off and the crowd roars with excitement, beginning the traditional Herndon applause before the starting line up is introduced. Herndon Basketball is perhaps the most respected athletic program at Herndon High School. The great traditions of the program push the current and future players to keep the tradition alive. The sport is played during the winter, but is in actually almost year round. During the season, we spend around twelve hours a week playing games and practicing. During, the offseason we play in many local leagues, attend open gyms, run a summer camp for younger kids, and attend a summer camp as a team. I have learned a great deal from being apart of such a unique program. Time management, respect, loyalty, and hard work highlight characteristics I have attained from playing basketball at Herndon.

--Should I focus more on me?

Jpuck 4 / 26  
Dec 25, 2010   #2
focus more on you, and how being a part of herndon has made you ascertain all of those skills. Pretty well written.
OP rajsmooth23 3 / 3  
Dec 26, 2010   #3
What should i eliminate!


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