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Born and raised in the Middle East, I learned the art of belly dancing from my aunt when I was little, and I cannot thank her enough.
I am a fan of all styles of music and dance. Even when I sit still, listening to music, I imagine myself dancing. No matter where I go and what I do, dance is a permanent part of my life.
I feel on top of the world when I dance. Dance makes all my problems and worries look trivial. The exhilarating sound of music in sync with the movements of my body feeds my soul. I feel confident and graceful when I dance. Music flows through me; it relaxes me. I embody the rhythms; I pour all I am into dancing. Sometimes I think that those who watch me dance can catch a glimpse of my soul.
Born and raised in the Middle East, I learned the art of belly dancing from my aunt when I was little, and I cannot thank her enough.
I am a fan of all styles of music and dance. Even when I sit still, listening to music, I imagine myself dancing. No matter where I go and what I do, dance is a permanent part of my life.
I feel on top of the world when I dance. Dance makes all my problems and worries look trivial. The exhilarating sound of music in sync with the movements of my body feeds my soul. I feel confident and graceful when I dance. Music flows through me; it relaxes me. I embody the rhythms; I pour all I am into dancing. Sometimes I think that those who watch me dance can catch a glimpse of my soul.