I don't know if I answered the prompt, but I hope it's good. Please grade it because I dont have much time. The deadline is coming close!!! D: . Be as hard as you want =).
PROMPT:
What influenced you to apply to Harvey Mudd College? What about the HMC curriculum and community appeals to you? (500 word limit)
What influenced me to apply to Harvey Mudd was HMC's unity. Although it is simple to create a tight community within a small liberal arts college, the school is able to bring about, define, and exemplify what unity is through its ongoing traditions and unique student life. From incessant screaming before finals to Puddle Jumping in every fountain, Mudders are able to participate together and have fun at dorm parties or school events. With over 100 student organizations, Mudders and professors help combine the high cultural and racial diversity to create one uniform community. Being like a family, everyone can work with and help each other seek their own unique talents while working individually on unique projects. While passing through Harvey Mudd, the question isn't "Hey, will I see you again?", but it's "Hey, when am I going to bump into you again today?". With this, I believe that Harvey Mudd's style of community would help me flourish both personally and intellectually and allow me discover my own potential in working with others.
Harvey Mudd will be the catalyst that will initiate my engineering goals and the provider that will offer me the excellent educational foundation and experience necessary to succeed. From the Engineering Sciences to the sequence of system courses, the rigorous and challenging curriculum that HMC presents will force me to think at a higher academic level and allow me to explore the different frontiers of engineering. From internal combustion engines that can power aircrafts to deriving hydrogen ions from water to propel vehicles, I can gain the technical knowledge that will help me implement my innovative and unique ideas in designing ground-breaking mechanical engines that would help revolutionize the dynamic world. Furthermore, the small and well equipped faculty will offer me many advantages in gaining maximum exposure to exceptional programs. With the Clinical program and multiple internships, HMC will develop my love for research and provide me with many opportunities to gain real hands on experience and direct interaction with intensive engineering projects.
PROMPT:
What influenced you to apply to Harvey Mudd College? What about the HMC curriculum and community appeals to you? (500 word limit)
What influenced me to apply to Harvey Mudd was HMC's unity. Although it is simple to create a tight community within a small liberal arts college, the school is able to bring about, define, and exemplify what unity is through its ongoing traditions and unique student life. From incessant screaming before finals to Puddle Jumping in every fountain, Mudders are able to participate together and have fun at dorm parties or school events. With over 100 student organizations, Mudders and professors help combine the high cultural and racial diversity to create one uniform community. Being like a family, everyone can work with and help each other seek their own unique talents while working individually on unique projects. While passing through Harvey Mudd, the question isn't "Hey, will I see you again?", but it's "Hey, when am I going to bump into you again today?". With this, I believe that Harvey Mudd's style of community would help me flourish both personally and intellectually and allow me discover my own potential in working with others.
Harvey Mudd will be the catalyst that will initiate my engineering goals and the provider that will offer me the excellent educational foundation and experience necessary to succeed. From the Engineering Sciences to the sequence of system courses, the rigorous and challenging curriculum that HMC presents will force me to think at a higher academic level and allow me to explore the different frontiers of engineering. From internal combustion engines that can power aircrafts to deriving hydrogen ions from water to propel vehicles, I can gain the technical knowledge that will help me implement my innovative and unique ideas in designing ground-breaking mechanical engines that would help revolutionize the dynamic world. Furthermore, the small and well equipped faculty will offer me many advantages in gaining maximum exposure to exceptional programs. With the Clinical program and multiple internships, HMC will develop my love for research and provide me with many opportunities to gain real hands on experience and direct interaction with intensive engineering projects.