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Human rights advocate - Stanford Roommate Letter Essay



Akuhah 4 / 10  
Dec 29, 2013   #1
Please help... really nervous about my application to stanford>> here is my letter to my roommate... i accept all advice

Dear Roomie,
You know that girl? That girl who loves writing so much, she has a collection of diaries dating back to the sixth grade? That girl whose long term memory is pristine but her short term memory is just - SHORT? Yea you know the one. That outspoken girl who has as much fun being the life of the party as she does reading a good book or having a heart to heart with her roommate? That girl is me.

I'm a native Jamaican, born and bred. I am always interested in learning new things and exploring new places. I am rather loquacious but I listen twice as much and I can guarantee that even if I can't fix your problems, I can take your mind off them. How will I do that? By teaching you various Jamaican sayings and singing Bob Marley's everything's gonna be alright at the top of my lungs until you sing along. Speaking of singing, I love karaoke and all genres of music. I'm a Swiftie, Lovatic, Selenator, Usher, T.I. and Ludacris fan. I'm a night owl; I find that I do my best work during the moonlit hours. That said, I'm not a morning person, my alarm clock is jealous of the relationship I have with my bed.

I'm an advocate for human rights and I will try anything at least once. Simply stated, I'm a bit complicated but I'm like an open book that you never want to put down. The best part is, this chapter is just beginning and I hope that you will help me with the story-line, creating memories that will last a lifetime.

P.s. My name is Tijuana. (yes it's Mexican but the only Spanish I know is Hola and Adios!)

darketernaly 2 / 4  
Dec 29, 2013   #2
overall it's a pretty good essay with nice transitions and I did not spot any grammatical errors. There's no reason to be nervous just relax. take a look at mine please?
Kristoria 3 / 51  
Dec 29, 2013   #3
Big up my fellow Jamaicans! I really liked this essay. The flow was good and at the same time I picked up a great deal of who you are. Very well done.

Could you also look at my Stanford essays?


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