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Have you ever imagine how your life would be without these most important people around you?



sarahlysse 1 / 1  
Oct 18, 2016   #1
How has your family history, culture, or environment influenced who you are? 250 words .

Have you ever imagine how your life would be is that person was not in it? the mos influenced people in my life probably no even aware of the things they've thought me.My stepmother is the most influential factor in creating the person I am today, and it took me a while to realize that .she has been able to guide me throughout my life time. My biological mother left me when I was only 3 years old since then my stepmother has been the one that take care of me and make sure I have everything I ask for . Raising me was a not an easy job . she went through a lot with my mother persecution.

justivy03 - / 2265  
Oct 19, 2016   #2
Hi Sarah, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website to be helpful and rather valuable to your writing projects, we aim at providing you with the most accurate and comprehensive feedback in order to enhance your essay and make it more worthy of submission. Having said that, please find my thoughts below;

- Have you ever imagine how your life would
- be isif the most influentialthat person
- wasis not in itwith you ?
- the mos influencedThis people
- in my lifeare probably
- not even aware of the things
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There you have it Sarah, overall, you have to work on your linking verbs as well as the proper form of words that you incorporate in your sentences and I suggest that you write a couple more sentences to finally close the topic as it looks and presents a half done essay.


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