Topic - Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.
I consider myself fortunate to have grown up in the environment I had. My parents being immigrants to America from Vietnam heavily influenced my decisions in life. Being born in Orange County, California and remaining there for my whole entire life allowed a vast analysis of the diverse community. Attending public schools allowed the interaction with different types of students. The creation of my goals and desires were dependent on the environment I had.
When my parents came over to America, they had to work their way up from their inferior jobs. My parents didn't have the opportunity to begin life as I did. Therefore, it was reasonable that they wanted me to outshine them. Relatives and friends of my parents, who were also immigrants and endured the same situation, shared the same belief. In the environment around my family, there were frequent conversations of how my generation's goal should be focused on achieving the most income. Bombarded by these discussions in my youth, my goal was set on achieving wealth. During my rebellious years of a teen, I discovered flaws in many of my beliefs originating from parental influence. Wealth is important but shouldn't be the only reason for a dream. All those suggestions of being a doctor, lawyer, and typical prestigious careers were void. Having decided to look for a goal based only on my judgment, I discovered multiple new careers that I wanted to pursue. Even though imperfections existed in my parent's advice, I'm content that those imperfections existed. Learning from those faults conveyed the establishing of my new goals.
My sister, who's six years older, performed better than me academically. Eventually, she became somewhat of a rival that I wanted to surpass. Even compared to other kids of my parent's friends, I never outperformed. Unable to tolerate being the underachieving one, I strived. Around ninth grade, I noticed that in every academic report, I never transcended my sister's. This epiphany forged the acknowledgement of my specialty, citizenship. Although I didn't outmatch my sister's academics, I did surpass her in citizenship. I viewed citizenship inferior to academics due to my family and their friends only concerning academics. Therefore, I persisted on sharpening my academics while specializing in citizenship. Being surrounded by an academically superior sister and a citizenship scorning family was emotionally crippling. However, striving to exceed provoked intellectual aspirations which wouldn't have occurred without the circumstances created by my family.
Orange County is far from a slum or ghetto. The copious amount of productive citizens influenced me to become contributing member of society while the lack of delinquents ensures that I persevere. Fountain Valley High school is competitive with the amount of profound students attending. Eventually, I abhorred my competitive peers for being obstacles hindering my goals. Through this animosity, my aspirations elevated in order to be the more successful of my competition. Occasionally, failure undermines my competitive spirit. However, observing the less successful gives me a sense of accomplishment, superiority, and pride that encourages me to progress. Every student contributed in the development of my aspirations.
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I consider myself fortunate to have grown up in the environment I had. My parents being immigrants to America from Vietnam heavily influenced my decisions in life. Being born in Orange County, California and remaining there for my whole entire life allowed a vast analysis of the diverse community. Attending public schools allowed the interaction with different types of students. The creation of my goals and desires were dependent on the environment I had.
When my parents came over to America, they had to work their way up from their inferior jobs. My parents didn't have the opportunity to begin life as I did. Therefore, it was reasonable that they wanted me to outshine them. Relatives and friends of my parents, who were also immigrants and endured the same situation, shared the same belief. In the environment around my family, there were frequent conversations of how my generation's goal should be focused on achieving the most income. Bombarded by these discussions in my youth, my goal was set on achieving wealth. During my rebellious years of a teen, I discovered flaws in many of my beliefs originating from parental influence. Wealth is important but shouldn't be the only reason for a dream. All those suggestions of being a doctor, lawyer, and typical prestigious careers were void. Having decided to look for a goal based only on my judgment, I discovered multiple new careers that I wanted to pursue. Even though imperfections existed in my parent's advice, I'm content that those imperfections existed. Learning from those faults conveyed the establishing of my new goals.
My sister, who's six years older, performed better than me academically. Eventually, she became somewhat of a rival that I wanted to surpass. Even compared to other kids of my parent's friends, I never outperformed. Unable to tolerate being the underachieving one, I strived. Around ninth grade, I noticed that in every academic report, I never transcended my sister's. This epiphany forged the acknowledgement of my specialty, citizenship. Although I didn't outmatch my sister's academics, I did surpass her in citizenship. I viewed citizenship inferior to academics due to my family and their friends only concerning academics. Therefore, I persisted on sharpening my academics while specializing in citizenship. Being surrounded by an academically superior sister and a citizenship scorning family was emotionally crippling. However, striving to exceed provoked intellectual aspirations which wouldn't have occurred without the circumstances created by my family.
Orange County is far from a slum or ghetto. The copious amount of productive citizens influenced me to become contributing member of society while the lack of delinquents ensures that I persevere. Fountain Valley High school is competitive with the amount of profound students attending. Eventually, I abhorred my competitive peers for being obstacles hindering my goals. Through this animosity, my aspirations elevated in order to be the more successful of my competition. Occasionally, failure undermines my competitive spirit. However, observing the less successful gives me a sense of accomplishment, superiority, and pride that encourages me to progress. Every student contributed in the development of my aspirations.
Thanks for the revision. Be as harsh as needed. =)