I'm applying to Rice University, and they have the applicants write an essay over their choice of schools.
"With the understanding that the choice of academic school you indicated is not binding, explain why you are applying to that particular school of study."
I'm applying to the Social Sciences school and would like some feedback on this essay:
I found out that an innocent man is in prison for rape and the one person that could verify this, the actual criminal, is now dead. Then the episode of Law & Order ended and left me pondering the flaws of the legal system of the United States. I saw this episode over a year ago, and over this time I have become more and more interested in becoming a lawyer in order to deliver justice for victims as well as help the wrongly accused. I believe that of the schools of study offered at Rice, the School of Social Sciences will be the best one to prepare me in my pursuit of a law degree.
If you see any mistakes or places I could(or should) provide more detail, please respond, but do so soon, this is due before 5 pm today.
"With the understanding that the choice of academic school you indicated is not binding, explain why you are applying to that particular school of study."
I'm applying to the Social Sciences school and would like some feedback on this essay:
I found out that an innocent man is in prison for rape and the one person that could verify this, the actual criminal, is now dead. Then the episode of Law & Order ended and left me pondering the flaws of the legal system of the United States. I saw this episode over a year ago, and over this time I have become more and more interested in becoming a lawyer in order to deliver justice for victims as well as help the wrongly accused. I believe that of the schools of study offered at Rice, the School of Social Sciences will be the best one to prepare me in my pursuit of a law degree.
If you see any mistakes or places I could(or should) provide more detail, please respond, but do so soon, this is due before 5 pm today.