Hello. I'm an international student from South Korea. I do not have much background about grammar and mechanical skills. So, please help me out to make better short answer. I welcome to get every comment for this short essay thanks.
Ragged clothing, enervating appearance, and powerless hands pleaded forrelief his condition.
"Don't worry; I will do everything for you. Your job is just holding your spot for me, okay?" I said.
Then I wipe off his body to make him feel better. With a smile from a haggard face he thanked to me and he follows my direction as well to serve him easier.
As I enter into the Intensive Care Unit, people are moving busily to serve patients faster.
Other volunteers already started serving patients. At Ulsan University Hospital, I'm a volunteer, who take care patients to keep good condition for them to cure their diseases.
While, this service can be regarded as a hard work, I recognize them as extremely penetrative as I can take some time to learn how much precious our life and strike up a conversation with people from various fields.
Ragged clothing, enervating appearance, and powerless hands pleaded forrelief his condition.
"Don't worry; I will do everything for you. Your job is just holding your spot for me, okay?" I said.
Then I wipe off his body to make him feel better. With a smile from a haggard face he thanked to me and he follows my direction as well to serve him easier.
As I enter into the Intensive Care Unit, people are moving busily to serve patients faster.
Other volunteers already started serving patients. At Ulsan University Hospital, I'm a volunteer, who take care patients to keep good condition for them to cure their diseases.
While, this service can be regarded as a hard work, I recognize them as extremely penetrative as I can take some time to learn how much precious our life and strike up a conversation with people from various fields.