I'm really nervous about submitting this essay. It's meaningful to me and (I believe)answers the question completely, however I don't want to shed myself in a negative (or too religious) light. Let me know what you interpret the overall message to be. Does the title fit? Comments and suggestions are appreciated!
What do you consider to be the most significant event in your life?
What Doesn't Kill You Only Makes You Stronger
Rewind to the 7th grade. I was your average student, albeit eccentric, but nonetheless normal. Not for long. You see, when I was in middle school, I was meek and kept more to myself than I do now. You'd think it would be the other way around, considering I was accused of being a homicidal 13-year-old.
I never agreed with what the 'popular kids' were wearing or approved of the offensive language. It's just the way I was raised, attending a Christian academy for several years. My morals grew very strong, however some might say I was still naïve. The girls my age targeted me, as I was the odd one out. They thought they could ruin what little reputation I had by starting a rumor. According to these girls I had a "hit list" and it spread like wildfire. After a while, it had gotten around to the whole school. At that time, there were school threat stories all over the news, referring back to Columbine and other tragedies. So students went home and told their parents, who called in, refusing to send their child to school with a maniac. As a solution to this I was expelled, and had to go to court and fight for my right to an education. It's always the quiet ones, huh?
There were a lot of accusations made against my parents and myself, all of which were cleared. I was permitted to start the next school year, but had to live with peers looking at me with the horrid expression of knowing, putting the name and the story to the face, and talking behind my back. That was hard to go through at such a young age, being a social outcast. Because no one has ever given me a chance, and it's hard to get past that.
Going back to my religious upbringing, I found strength from promises in the Bible, one of which was:
"There hath no temptation taken you but such as is common to man: but God is faithful, who will not suffer you to be tempted above that ye are able; but will with the temptation also make a way to escape, that ye may be able to bear it"
1 Corinthians 10:13
This verse showed me that God was with me, and that I would get through this with His help. The situation as a whole was unwarranted. I did nothing wrong, so why was I being punished? Out of my adolescence, this experience is meaningful not because of how traumatizing it was, but because I learned so many life lessons over a short period of time. Events like this although painful, serve to make us stronger. We learn perseverance through hardships in life. We learn how to deal with other struggles we will inevitably be faced with. It's difficult to be left out, to be outside the crowd. But now, I have accepted myself, and know can't change my past; but graduation day, I'm eager for a fresh start.
I never agreed with what the 'popular kids' were wearing, or approved of the offensive language.
Going back to my religious upbringing, I found strength from promises in the Bible, one of which was: "Th ere hath no temptation taken you but ...
Out of my adolescence, this experience is meaningful not only because of how traumatizing it was,...
Events like this, although painful, serve to make us stronger.
But now---no comma here--- I have accepted myself, and know I can't change my past; but graduation day, I'm eager for a fresh start.
Nice essay, I like your unique writing style, it's very engaging! Good luck in school, and have fun!
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