Knowledge, responsibility, respect, passion, a desire to help others, and strength were a few of these characteristics that I thought every physician assistant should possess. I believe that I encapsulate these features and it is my goal to employ them when I become a physician assistant.
say: these things "topped my list, and I believe I have these qualities." Flowing language is nice, but sometimes it's flowing... without end. Shorten that down.
I'm not going to read the whole thing because I can see you've merely dressed up things on a resume, and I can't learn anything about you besides your writing skills... I'm seriously assuming you included a detailed resume in your application materials, because you should have, and all these points should be on that.
This is your personal statement, in lieu of a face to face conference, this is it. Your last chance. You're telling me why you want to be a P.A. with general points. You need to give us something specific, with your reflection on it. I don't know any more about you than a detailed resume.
Pick an event, something definitive, and use that to tell us why you are interested in medicine and helping others. You've demonstrated you "are" helping people... not "why" you want to... or "why" you want to help people more by becoming a P.A.
I know that there may not be a single experience that brings across all the qualities you wish to put out... I'm not telling you to lie, I'm suggesting you can creatively reflect on a true situation. How you personally reflect on a situation is just as important as how you handled that situation. So, tell me again. Why do you want to become a physician assistant?