'a Kuwaiti student that came to the USA' - purpose of statement essay

Can anyone help me with my essay :(

i want a strong interducation here is my int

I am a Kuwaiti student that came to the USA with my family. I have a love for learning English Language and I always have been enthusiastic about English. I spent a lot of time reading English when I came to the U.S and feel that this benefited me by encouraging me to develop and learn quickly.

I am a Kuwaiti student that came to the United States with my family. I have a love for learning the English l anguage and I always have been enthusiastic about English. I spent a lot of time reading English when I came to the U.S and feel that this has benefited me by encouraging me to develop and learn quickly.

I am a Kuwaiti student; I came to the United States with my family. I've always loved learning the English language and been enthusiastic about it. I spent a lot of time reading English when I came to the United States, I feel that reading has benefited me by helping me develop and learn quickly.

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