Additional Information
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English Barrier (Word Count: 1035)
In February 2008, about two and half years ago, I stepped on the land of Canada. Since then, I have been challenged by the new environment. In my home country Korea, nobody ever spoke in English. Except in the 45 minutes of English class twice a week, I never read, listened, spoke, or wrote something in English. Consequently, when it came to studying at a Canadian secondary school in the middle of grade 9, English was an unbeatable hindrance. I had to take ESL classes to overcome the language barrier. I had to sit on my chair for the whole day only to write the notorious five-paragraph essay (I never wrote any English essay before). I had to bother teachers every day after school. But I never gave up. After about one year of hardworking, my English improved. I even could take and finish Grade 10 English course with an A. I did not need to bother teachers anymore. I still have weakness in English. It is undeniable. But if I challenge myself in American college, I will be improved as did I in Canadian high school.
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- I wrote this essay with a hope to explain my terrible SAT reading & writing score. Any critique/help on the essay will be appreciated. Also the word count limit is 1000, so I need to work on cutting it down.
- I am not sure whether this is the section to write something like this. Should I write about the honors (awards..) that I could not mention in the honors section due to # limit?
- I also went to a math camp in USA. The camp was held in a University. So I filled "Colleges and Universities section" ("If you have attended any colleges since 9th grade, including summer schools or enrichment programs hosted on a college campus") with the math camp. Should I write details about the camp in Additional Information section instead of the essay I wrote above?
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THANK YOU VERY MUCH EVEN FOR READING THIS!!!!
-Include any additional information that you would like to provide regarding special circumstances, additional qualifications, etc.
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English Barrier (Word Count: 1035)
In February 2008, about two and half years ago, I stepped on the land of Canada. Since then, I have been challenged by the new environment. In my home country Korea, nobody ever spoke in English. Except in the 45 minutes of English class twice a week, I never read, listened, spoke, or wrote something in English. Consequently, when it came to studying at a Canadian secondary school in the middle of grade 9, English was an unbeatable hindrance. I had to take ESL classes to overcome the language barrier. I had to sit on my chair for the whole day only to write the notorious five-paragraph essay (I never wrote any English essay before). I had to bother teachers every day after school. But I never gave up. After about one year of hardworking, my English improved. I even could take and finish Grade 10 English course with an A. I did not need to bother teachers anymore. I still have weakness in English. It is undeniable. But if I challenge myself in American college, I will be improved as did I in Canadian high school.
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- I wrote this essay with a hope to explain my terrible SAT reading & writing score. Any critique/help on the essay will be appreciated. Also the word count limit is 1000, so I need to work on cutting it down.
- I am not sure whether this is the section to write something like this. Should I write about the honors (awards..) that I could not mention in the honors section due to # limit?
- I also went to a math camp in USA. The camp was held in a University. So I filled "Colleges and Universities section" ("If you have attended any colleges since 9th grade, including summer schools or enrichment programs hosted on a college campus") with the math camp. Should I write details about the camp in Additional Information section instead of the essay I wrote above?
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THANK YOU VERY MUCH EVEN FOR READING THIS!!!!