"larger and profound education" - Why did i choose to apply to ucf?

I'm applying to the University of Central Florida because I feel that I'm ready for a much larger and profound education. I've always been a year ahead, in terms of grade levels; I skipped eighth grade and enrolled straight into high school, leading into me graduating at the age of sixteen. After high school, I chose to apply to Broward College for one year because I felt it would be a good stepping-stone to then take off for a bigger university. Looking throughout different Universities, I found the computer science program in the University of Central Florida to be one of the best; they'll prepare me for what the market is looking for in software development. UCF will give me the correct preparation for a graduate school where I can master my abilities to succeed and change the world.

Thank you, John

I'm applying to the University of Central Florida because I feel that I'm ready for a much larger and profound education. If you're going to use the word 'profound' here, you need to add a sentence after this one, telling what you mean by it. "Much larger and profound" doesn't sound right, profounder is a word that sounds as silly as 'stupider', so you'll just have to add a sentence. :)

...skipped eighth grade and enrolled straight into high school, leading to my graduation at the age of sixteen.

After high school, I chose to apply to Broward College for one year because I felt it would be a good transition period before enrolling at a bigger university.

During my research of different Universities, I found the computer science program in the University of Central...