Hello!
I am currently applying to colleges on the Common App. Please help me by telling me what you think of my response to the question:
If you are not currently enrolled in college full-time, please describe in detailed chronological order your activities since last enrolled in school full-time.
Since I was last enrolled in college full-time in 2007, I committed myself to working multiple jobs, working at various entry level jobs to support not only my education, but my living expenses. I would work five times a week; on my days off I visit my mother and take care of her. What time I had left for myself I would study in my bedroom.
It's so short... I feel like I need to add more words. Any suggestions?
-Ali
I am currently applying to colleges on the Common App. Please help me by telling me what you think of my response to the question:
If you are not currently enrolled in college full-time, please describe in detailed chronological order your activities since last enrolled in school full-time.
Since I was last enrolled in college full-time in 2007, I committed myself to working multiple jobs, working at various entry level jobs to support not only my education, but my living expenses. I would work five times a week; on my days off I visit my mother and take care of her. What time I had left for myself I would study in my bedroom.
It's so short... I feel like I need to add more words. Any suggestions?
-Ali