My leadership skills will benefit the university community and cause for a better society to live in

Leadership is commonly used to describe the perfect student: however, I am far from being the perfect student, yet I still possess leadership as ne of my greatest qualities. Leadership is the position or function held by a leader, whether it's through a sports team or a graduating class. I enclose the qualities of a leader, therefore if put in any circumstance where leadership needs to be taken into consideration, I will fit the job.

Leadership is a quality of one's personality that can help or destruct the way many people live. However, with my leadership expertise, I will help the university community in many ways. Because a "college town" is known for partying and messing around, the leadership aspect of living comes into play.

Obtaining an officer position for a sorority will help improve my leadership aptitude and my ability to change the way certain situations occur in a "college town." Leading a sorority or a graduating class will also make my time worthy. Helping others gain leadership skills and applying them to life will also show as some respects to my consistency of being a leader. To show that I have influenced on one's life and have made them a better leader in life, shows how I have done and completed my job as a leader.

All in all, my leadership skills will only benefit the university community and cause for a better society to live in.

I am concerned because you talk of your leadership skills and define leadership in many assorted ways, but you never discuss your skills or leadership experience(s) in any way; this gives the impression that your piece doesn't have any substance to it. Delve a bit deeper and explain exactly what your skills are and what you have used them for in order to make this a more meaningful piece.

Thank you for very much. I appreciate your input.