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College of Literature, Science, and the Arts (LSA): (250 words) What led you to choose the area(s) of academic interest that you have listed in your application to the University of Michigan? If you are undecided, what areas are you most interested in, and why?
When I was a little girl, I imagined myself having the ability of mind-reading. I have always been interested to know what people are thinking or what makes them do certain things. In a dentist's room or a restaurant my 8-year-old self could not help but stared at people in what I hoped a discreet manner. Little details, like the way their bored eyes darted across the room or the way they scratched their heads searching for answers, fascinated me. Often, I would play a solitary guessing game, trying to comprehend their situations.
As I grew older, I have abandoned my fantasy of having the superpower, but my intention remains the same. I regard human beings as highly complex creatures, complete with convoluted thoughts hidden beneath deceiving exterior. I realize that people can not be analyzed mathematically, sometimes even logically. With people, there are no sets of fixed answers, nor will there ever be. In a strange way, this fact excites me and calms me, for I am guaranteed that I will never run out of things to learn.
My childhood enthrallment has developed into a more serious interest as my curiosity of observing people intensified. I grow to love listening to people's stories, learning how they think, and analyzing and identifying reasons of their doings.
The ongoing quest of understanding people cultivated the desire in me to learn the subject formally. Looking back, I am certain that studying Psychology at the university seems very reasonable, even engaging. After all, it is authenticating the innocent dream of my eight-year-old self.
College of Literature, Science, and the Arts (LSA): (250 words) What led you to choose the area(s) of academic interest that you have listed in your application to the University of Michigan? If you are undecided, what areas are you most interested in, and why?
When I was a little girl, I imagined myself having the ability of mind-reading. I have always been interested to know what people are thinking or what makes them do certain things. In a dentist's room or a restaurant my 8-year-old self could not help but stared at people in what I hoped a discreet manner. Little details, like the way their bored eyes darted across the room or the way they scratched their heads searching for answers, fascinated me. Often, I would play a solitary guessing game, trying to comprehend their situations.
As I grew older, I have abandoned my fantasy of having the superpower, but my intention remains the same. I regard human beings as highly complex creatures, complete with convoluted thoughts hidden beneath deceiving exterior. I realize that people can not be analyzed mathematically, sometimes even logically. With people, there are no sets of fixed answers, nor will there ever be. In a strange way, this fact excites me and calms me, for I am guaranteed that I will never run out of things to learn.
My childhood enthrallment has developed into a more serious interest as my curiosity of observing people intensified. I grow to love listening to people's stories, learning how they think, and analyzing and identifying reasons of their doings.
The ongoing quest of understanding people cultivated the desire in me to learn the subject formally. Looking back, I am certain that studying Psychology at the university seems very reasonable, even engaging. After all, it is authenticating the innocent dream of my eight-year-old self.
