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Since it looks like we'll be living together, we'll get to know a lot about each other! My roommate.



blondie51295 2 / 5  
Dec 23, 2012   #1
Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate - and us - know you better.

Since it looks like we'll be living together, we'll get to know a lot about each other! Well, let me start by saying I'm excited to be living with you. While living at boarding school and in the matter of just one year, I had the experience and opportunity to live with a total of five different roommates, so hopefully I've learned and will be a good roommate. One characteristic about me that you may notice is I can be very random and it may seem that I have ADD (attention deficit disorder) at times.

My friends, happiness, and pink are very important to me. I love being surrounded by my friends, and I can be found with my closest friends most of the time. Please don't be surprised if I'm rarely in the room. I enjoy helping others whenever possible, whether it involves me being just a set of ears to listen or helping them with homework, and I hope I will be able to help you whenever needed. I do my best studying outside of my room and spend lots of time at places like the library to study. I believe you need a balance of hard studying and stress relief. Two things I enjoy to relieve stress are puzzles and Disney, especially the Disney Princess movies. I love the happiness, inspiration, and motivation Disney portrays. Combining these two things, I have several Disney puzzles that may serve as decoration for our room. I am very sporadic and try my best to be optimistic, but like anyone sometime I just need my blanket and quiet time to ponder life. I like to think I keep the lives of those I'm around interesting. Do you have any fun or special quirks about yourself?

I hope this gave you a taste of who you'll be rooming with, that we will have a blast as roommates, and we'll get to know each other better over time.

GirlNextDoor 1 / 2  
Dec 23, 2012   #2
Ah I just finished this one also!
Overall I liked your essay. I think the way you wrote your essay goes perfectly with what you are actually saying in it. I can tell that you are a very bubbly, and almost always happy person! I liked it but maybe add more about you and what you value if you aren't too close to your character limit. I read something that said that it isn't just about telling your hobbies and what you like- its about conveying who you are and what you value. But I actually really liked it and I loved how the way you wrote matched what you saying, so well done! And good luck!! :)


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