to be with creative and open-minded thinkers, with culturally diverse people,
to be with creative, open-minded and culturally diverse people.I want to have access to unparalleled Engineering resources; to be with creative and open-minded thinkers, with culturally diverse people, in atmospheres that nurture intellectual growth; to learn under scholars and visionaries; to study in a rigorous Engineering program and earn a respected degree; to live in a great city like Atlanta. I believe GATech can provide me with all of these, that's why.
You give a list of things that you presume you would be able to experience at Georgia Tech. However, I like if you cited some features of Georgia Tech and linked these things to them. It gives them an impression that you've done your homework.