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Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it. (Approximately 250 words)
"Can you please stop singing? I am getting tired of listening to the same song over and over... You've sang that song for more than two hours already!" This is what my mom used to tell me whenever we drove to my grandmother's house every summer vacation. As a 6 years old girl who has just recently learned how to play piano, my life was literally full of music. Since then, music has become a big part of my life, which defines me as a person.
More recently, my interest in music has led me to join school's band and has developed me into a fervent participant of a cooperative act, especially as a 1st clarinet player in wind ensemble band. I, unlike other people casually enjoying rock music or hip-hop, began to appreciate music in other ways: I found out how my small and seemingly trivial part can contribute to the sound of the band as a whole and create a mellifluous harmony. Therefore, with this realization, attending band class has been a dominant part of my school life. Every time I sign up for classes, band has been my priority. Everyday, I end my day with music, which refreshes and relieves my fatigue. Yes. It is true that I am never going to be like Chopin or Mozart, who can magically create a masterpiece or play a song with no effort. However, despite this fact, I am still a lover of music.
Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it. (Approximately 250 words)
"Can you please stop singing? I am getting tired of listening to the same song over and over... You've sang that song for more than two hours already!" This is what my mom used to tell me whenever we drove to my grandmother's house every summer vacation. As a 6 years old girl who has just recently learned how to play piano, my life was literally full of music. Since then, music has become a big part of my life, which defines me as a person.
More recently, my interest in music has led me to join school's band and has developed me into a fervent participant of a cooperative act, especially as a 1st clarinet player in wind ensemble band. I, unlike other people casually enjoying rock music or hip-hop, began to appreciate music in other ways: I found out how my small and seemingly trivial part can contribute to the sound of the band as a whole and create a mellifluous harmony. Therefore, with this realization, attending band class has been a dominant part of my school life. Every time I sign up for classes, band has been my priority. Everyday, I end my day with music, which refreshes and relieves my fatigue. Yes. It is true that I am never going to be like Chopin or Mozart, who can magically create a masterpiece or play a song with no effort. However, despite this fact, I am still a lover of music.