"I want to make homes, not houses, homes" ; FIT application

As a child everyone is asked, "what do you want to be when you grow up?". Most children answered a teacher, an astronaut, or even a racecar driver. However, when I was asked I said, "I want to make homes, not houses, homes." To me, a home is somewhere a person feels comfortable in. Making a home yours, to me, means putting everything you love inside. I have always loved art; I believe it's a way to express yourself when you are not able to put your feelings into words. I chose Interior design as my major because it is a combination of making a home and art.

Growing up I started to realize the importance of interior design. My aunt is an interior designer; I loved to watch her work as a child. The way she put together homes, room by room, made me realize that this is where my art can be shown and make homes at the same time. As I grew older I started to draw out my rooms of my home. After a while I began to realize that the art of interior design can go further then just a home, I started to draw out offices and stores.

After High school, I never realized I can move past my drawings therefore I stalled in finding my way back to interior design. However, this year I realized I could pursue my dreams and make something out of them. I hope that in FIT I can work my way up and make the dreams I always wanted to come true.

STUCK FROM HERE! HELP!

I think you can reduce the use of "home". It is a bit too repetitive, perhaps use some other words to replace them.

This is a good topic to develop. It can be even better if you can describe more on what kind of home you want to build,

how you want to impress the owner of the house? Just some small advice, hope it will help.

It is really great, keep going. Best of luck!