"I would view myself as a unique for my passion for knowledge, as I have a desire to know more about the computer world, in which I want to be an innovator. I download ebooks that teach me software developing. Besides I am a meticulous person, who strives for perfection and excellence likes to go over everything to the finest detail, and want to succeed in every task I am given. In fact, when going through source code I try to check any error or spelling mistake .Also, I am open minded about new ideas and enthusiastic about learning and exploring new cultures."
What makes YOU unique? point to specific qualities, hobbies, interests, talents..
Give some examples. Describe some of the tasks you have gone over in the finest detail and done perfectly. Describe your passion for knowledge. For example "I went to my local college and found a professor that taught me about writing code and building programs."
Basically ask yourself How and Why all these are important and build a complete answer with that.
Basically ask yourself How and Why all these are important and build a complete answer with that.
You essay is a little scattered. You have maken the claim that you are unique because you are passionate learner, then you should give strong analysis or examples to support this . However,In the essay above, after gving the claim, you do not give enough evidence to support it but discuss other things such as 'meticulousness', which i can see few relations with your passion.
