"My mathematics teacher" - A person who has a significant influence in my life.

If a teacher comes into class and takes the back of his hand to student, most developed society calls it assault. The court of law may sentence that man for assaulting his students. Smacking, spanking, beating and other physical punishments were common, the place I learned elementary school. I remember it, as it was yesterday surprisingly as my state of mind, When I was grade four , At the second day of his lesson, my new mathematics teacher did all those to my classmates who didn't do their math homework or didn't participate in class. Some times person like my mathematics teacher make you discover yourself as a person and give you strong point to overcome your limitation. That is the one person who has a significant influence in my life

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- my new mathematics teacher did all those to my classmates who didn't dohad not done their math homework

-Some times person like my mathematics teacher makes you discover yourself as a person and gives you a strong point to overcome your limitation.

These ae great corrections! I hope they help you improve your English, Esayas. Here is the correct way to use the common phrase, "I remember it as if it happened yesterday."

I remember, as it happened yesterday, the surprises state of mind that I was in when I was in grade four and, on the second day of his lesson, my new mathematics teacher did all those to my classmates who had not done math homework or were not participating in class.

Everyone is affected by certain events or individuals that greatly change their life. Many people have influenced me in my life. But my fourth grade mathematics teacher influences my life in the hard way. If a teacher comes into class and takes the back of his hand to student, most developed society calls it assault. The court of law may sentence that man for assaulting his students. Smacking, spanking, beating and other physical punishments were common, the place I learned elementary school.

I remember, as it happened yesterday, the surprises state of mind that I was in when I was in grade four and, on the second day of his lesson, my new mathematics teacher did all those to my classmates who had not done math homework or were not participating in class. Some times person like my mathematics teacher makes you discover yourself as a person and gives you a strong point to overcome your limitation. That is the one person who has strong significant influence in my life