MATLAB to model, regarding graduate admission essay

Hello, guys.

while I work with my personal statement, I came up with one question.

Would you look at it? and please give some advice?

Moreover, I utilized MATLAB to model the second-order linear difference equation in order to enhance the more precise prediction of the Phillips Curve in the Differential Equations course.

I am not quite sure this sentence is properly written in terms of grammatical errors.

I appreciate it.

after reading that sentence, i though about engineering stuff. i assume that is where you are going in to.

as for the sentence, i don't think there is any errors in it. i am going to assume that you are going to write something before that sentence.

It may depend on the preceding sentence, but if you can drop moreover you can restructure the sentence to flow better.

Moreover, I utilized MATLAB to model the second-order linear difference equation in order to enhance the more precise prediction of the Phillips Curve in the Differential Equations course

I have also utilized MATLAB in my Differential Equations course in order to model the second-order linear difference equation, which is used to enhance the more precise prediction of the Phillips Curve.

I appreciate your help guys.

Have a nice day.

Great discussion here!
I thought of this:
Moreover, I utilized MATLAB to model the second-order linear difference equation in order to enhance the more precise prediction of accuracy with which I could predict the Phillips Curve in the Differential Equations course.

Wow, I don't understand this equation stuff! I'm glad you do.