Hi, I'm trying to see if this works as an extra curricular essay although it's a bit of a different approach. Any comments are really appreciated and I value your opinions! Many many thanks in advance.
I am in the middle of a war zone. The air is thick with cries of battle and the enemy surrounds me from all four sides, their expressions unforgiving. Suddenly, they all turn to face me. I realize I have been selected as the next victim. I tremble as the missile is launched in my direction, and instinctively bring my hands up over my face to defend myself. I manage only just to avoid it-I hear a thump as the basketball falls to the ground.
I cannot handle a basketball to save my life. And yet, during the Inter House Basketball Tournament at my school, I found myself taking part; simply due to the reason that our House would not have enough people otherwise. This memory is not one of victory. In fact, we had placed last, with me having falling flat on the ground more than once in the middle of the game. But we hadn't been in it to win it. Our participation had been enough, and as I recall our expressions of laughter, none of us upset about our loss, it makes me realize that sometimes, it's not about winning; sometimes it's about being a team player and taking one for the team; sometimes, it's about molding your own happiness.
I am in the middle of a war zone. The air is thick with cries of battle and the enemy surrounds me from all four sides, their expressions unforgiving. Suddenly, they all turn to face me. I realize I have been selected as the next victim. I tremble as the missile is launched in my direction, and instinctively bring my hands up over my face to defend myself. I manage only just to avoid it-I hear a thump as the basketball falls to the ground.
I cannot handle a basketball to save my life. And yet, during the Inter House Basketball Tournament at my school, I found myself taking part; simply due to the reason that our House would not have enough people otherwise. This memory is not one of victory. In fact, we had placed last, with me having falling flat on the ground more than once in the middle of the game. But we hadn't been in it to win it. Our participation had been enough, and as I recall our expressions of laughter, none of us upset about our loss, it makes me realize that sometimes, it's not about winning; sometimes it's about being a team player and taking one for the team; sometimes, it's about molding your own happiness.