My mom put a lot of effort teaching me manners, how to be respectful, determinant and full of life.

The person who has had a significant influence on me is obviously my mother. She put a lot of effort giving me lessons in manners throughout my life, She taught me to be respectful, determinant and full of life. I learn from her all the time and she is the only person who listens to me when I'm in a trouble no matter how silly i was, She is my idol.

what do you think?

thanks in advance..
Manar

Manar, could you please write what was the asignment for this piece?? See, if it was to describe why you admire the person you admire, then I would elaborate more on the exact reason and be less vague.

Thanks for your respond Alina ... I'm Admitting to to the "University of the people" and this is one of the essays required for the application. I would be grateful if you tell me if there's any grammar mistakes or any mistake at all... Thank you again. Manar.