My mother is my model - she has had the greatest influence on my life

A person who has had an important influence on your life

Person who has had an important influence on my life í my mother. She is not only child bearing me but also rearing me. Everyday, she gets up at 5 a.m to cook breakfast for family. Then she has to work hard all day until the night. However, she takes care me caringly. She is sacrifice woman. She spends all time of her life for family. She always stand by me. When I am sad, she encourages me, makes me feel warm. Whenever I failed, she gave advice. It í motivation for meto get over every difficulties in my life. She í always strong and patient. Last but not least, she is my model. I love her so much.

Hello... I applied some stylistic corrections to your text so that it sounds better:

i [...] is (my mother).
She [...] She did not only give me birth but also made it possible for me to receive a proper upbringing.
for [...] for the family.
all [...] all-day-long into the late hours.
However [...] She, however, continues to take care of me.
She [...] is a self-sacrificial woman.
She [...] My mother's whole life if completely dedicated to the family.
failed [...] In times when I fail, she strives to comfort me.
it [...] Because of my mother, I have always felt motivated trying to become a better person.
Last [...] Thus, I indeed have many good reasons to think of my mother as a role model.

I hope it helped. Regards.

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Here's my take on your essay;

- The person who
- She is not only child bearingdid not only conceived and delivered me but
- also rearingtook care of me in every way she can .
- However, she takes care me caringlyWith her busy schedule, she's still able to take care of me .
- She is sacrificedwoman .
- She spends all her time
- ofto her life for family.

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