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MOTHERHOOD AND MOTHER'S LOVE; NYU! WHAT INTRIGUES YOU?



qr1995 3 / 7  
Dec 30, 2012   #1
Please let me know what to change or fix! Any opinions are welcomed! Thank you!

Mothers trade a relaxing night's sleep for dark under eye circles, a stylish salon haircut for a quick messy bun, a luxurious bubble bath for a 5-minute shower, a romantic date night for early school morning, a Louis Vuitton speedy handbag for a Jansport backpack, and their entire life for just a smile.

But why?

Motherhood - our world's most captivating love story and most enduring journey. There is nothing more special, more stronger, and more magical than the bond between a mother and her child. A mother's love is powerful, unconditional, and most comforting. There really is nothing in the world quite like it; it can't ever be replaced or replicated. It is a force that breaks all rules and defies all theories. A mother loves her child before it is even born, and will continue to love her child even after she dies. A mother's love knows no boundaries. It has no beginning or end.As my mom always told me, "Being a mother is the highest-paid job in the world because the paycheck is made out to your heart in the amount of infinite love."

My mother's love and undying support have been a major driving force in my life. No matter what the circumstances, good or bad, when ever I needed her, she was there in a heartbeat. If it wasn't for my mother, I wouldn't even be applying to college. She showed me the importance of getting a good education, of being content with what you have, and of making something out of your life. I guess what I'm really trying to say is - Thank You, Mom.

yuzec95 3 / 25  
Dec 30, 2012   #2
But why?

i've heard that we should generally try and avoid rhetorical questions in our essays. Just be straightforward. :)
OP qr1995 3 / 7  
Dec 30, 2012   #3
what do you mean?
yuzec95 3 / 25  
Dec 30, 2012   #4
Instead of asking "But why?" transition straight into what you have to say.
OP qr1995 3 / 7  
Dec 30, 2012   #5
oh ok got it, i was thinking the same thing too actually. thanks for your help! but do you think of the actual essay?


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