We know you lead a busy life, full of activities, many of which are required of you. Tell us about something you do for the pleasure of it. (*)(100 words or fewer)
Music is something that always made me feel relaxed no matter how stressed I am. As I watch videos on how play a song on piano, I try my best to keep a photographic memory of the notes being played and then I try to play it on my keyboard. Even though, I am a naive keyboard player and still cannot read sheet music, I enjoy the pleasure that I am playing my favorite song on the keyboard. Therefore, whenever I find free time, I play my keyboard, which gives me the utmost pleasure and satisfaction.
Is it good or bad? Please be candid.
AHHH... the dreadful 100words or fewer response lol
it's harder to write than an essay because it doesn't give u a lot of room to explain.
I like how you talk about musci because it's probably something that is unrelated to your major...
but this response it boring...
start out with like an action of you playing a specific song or quote something like "F sharp..no,no..B?" something like that...i donno
i just think it's so bland...
I also wrote about music, but guitar. U seem quite similar to me.
I faced the same problem. I know how difficult it is to wrote in 100 words.
I think your essay is fine, but not very special because after read your essay I feel that u like playing keyboard but not very passionate in it. But I don't really know how to change it.
Maybe you can talk about how your soul connects to the musics you play? OR Which song you play when U sad, happy ...? How your emotion change after play a song?
I mean you should talk more specific about your feeling.
That's my idea. Hope it's useful!
Good luck to you!
Emerged in a cavernous depth of emotional sounds, I am moved to. Watching videos on how to play a song on the piano, I keep a photographic memory of the notes being played and then play it on my piano. Even though, I am a dilettante and still cannot read music, I enjoy playing my favorite songs as it gives me the utmost pleasure and satisfaction..
I rewrote this essay and made it kinda short. I don't know what else I can add on here. Please help...
Emerge means to rise up out of it. Maybe that first word should be "submerged?"
Submerged in a cavernous depth ---but then, depth cannot be cavernous, so you still have to rework this sentence.
of emotional sounds, I am moved, too .
gives me the utmost pleasure and satisfaction..--Right here, I bet you can come up with a clever way to express the same idea... a way to make the reader able to understand it a little.
:-)
