Hi guys!
My name is Nick. I am from Vietnam. I study english by my own so my writing is not really good.
Recently, I've seen a very nice english speaking contest and I decided to take part in.
However, paticipants initially have to write and essay about yourself (150 - 300 words) and submit via email.
I spent a few days doing the essay and I've just finished it.
Now I really need your help in proofreading it before I submit to the contest oganizer.
Thanks a lot.
Nick.
Here is my essay:
Essay about yourself.
" Nam is an enthusiastic and humorous guy", " Nam is open minded and has tons of fun to be with". These are references which I received from majority of people I have met before whether they are local Vietnameses or foreigners.
I'd love to meet new people to listen to their stories as well as sharing my own stories. Therefore, I realize that everyone has his hidden talents and those deserve to be learnt. Whenever I have a conversation, I usually joke people around in order to make them laugh. I'd like to create a friendly and informal atmosphere where everybody gets together and has fun. I myself live to find the joy.
My name is Nam. I am 23 years old. I am a third year student in Business Administration major. I'm currently living in Tan Phu district. I like making new friends, listening to music, playing sports...
I am good at communication. Few years ago, I was a consultant and I did some business negotiations pretty well. Also, I am good at English. I have participated " The Open Challenge - English Contest" in Open University where I was awarded third prize. However, I am not really good at studying finance but I am striving to get over it. My future goal is to run my own enterprise and do business internationally. By studying Business Administration together with my English, I am step by step achieving that goal.
Eventually, I know that life has many obstacles which prevent me from reaching my targets. Nevertheless, once I try my best, I will be able to overcome them and be fulfilled again. Motivation is an essential factor but how you maintain it is even more essential. Thus, I am supposed to learn how to maintain it everyday.
My name is Nick. I am from Vietnam. I study english by my own so my writing is not really good.
Recently, I've seen a very nice english speaking contest and I decided to take part in.
However, paticipants initially have to write and essay about yourself (150 - 300 words) and submit via email.
I spent a few days doing the essay and I've just finished it.
Now I really need your help in proofreading it before I submit to the contest oganizer.
Thanks a lot.
Nick.
Here is my essay:
Essay about yourself.
" Nam is an enthusiastic and humorous guy", " Nam is open minded and has tons of fun to be with". These are references which I received from majority of people I have met before whether they are local Vietnameses or foreigners.
I'd love to meet new people to listen to their stories as well as sharing my own stories. Therefore, I realize that everyone has his hidden talents and those deserve to be learnt. Whenever I have a conversation, I usually joke people around in order to make them laugh. I'd like to create a friendly and informal atmosphere where everybody gets together and has fun. I myself live to find the joy.
My name is Nam. I am 23 years old. I am a third year student in Business Administration major. I'm currently living in Tan Phu district. I like making new friends, listening to music, playing sports...
I am good at communication. Few years ago, I was a consultant and I did some business negotiations pretty well. Also, I am good at English. I have participated " The Open Challenge - English Contest" in Open University where I was awarded third prize. However, I am not really good at studying finance but I am striving to get over it. My future goal is to run my own enterprise and do business internationally. By studying Business Administration together with my English, I am step by step achieving that goal.
Eventually, I know that life has many obstacles which prevent me from reaching my targets. Nevertheless, once I try my best, I will be able to overcome them and be fulfilled again. Motivation is an essential factor but how you maintain it is even more essential. Thus, I am supposed to learn how to maintain it everyday.