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prompt: Describe a circumstance, obstacle or conflict in your life, and the skills and resources you used to resolve it. Did it change you? If so, how?
Living with your mother and dad together is a great boon. Growing up with my family, my parents were always taking care of me, and I was the happiest person in the world. But life isn't always fair, when I entered my high school; my parents' problems have become more obvious and complex. They suddenly stopped talking to each other. I didn't know what was happening, but I thought it was a small dispute and everything will return the same, but that wasn't the case.
I remembered that day when my mother called my sister and I to her room, and told us the shocking truth, in a few weeks she will leave us to her parents' home she said that their problem became so complex and they will break up. I didn't expect this scenario happening even in my dreams, I felt disappointed, frustrated and kept my tears from falling, but my older sister was stronger than me, she understood the circumstance and kept herself calm and relaxed. After which, I lived the worst days in my life, I couldn't think about anything else, and while I was lost, my mother had gone.
My dad was working for long hours till midnight, so my sister and I were alone at home most time. I started to understand the situation, now I had to depend on myself on everything. My sister helped me to find myself and taught me important lessons; we forgot about our old life and made a new one. We cooperated to do the housekeeping and take care of ourselves, and now we have got used to all of that. Living without my parents benefited, and that fear disappeared forever. This situation taught me many things that I won't forget ever, and the most important thing that now I know how to deal with my problems.
My beliefs and view of life had changed a lot after that experience; I learnt how the life could be harsh sometimes. The idea of surrender was always going on in my mind, and I felt despair many times, but I keep pushing forward, all of that just strengthen me. Failure is the key for success, and being patient is the secret to solve problems. Now I have the power to face my difficulties, and became a person anyone could rely upon him.
i am not very good so i want your suggestion to improve it
prompt: Describe a circumstance, obstacle or conflict in your life, and the skills and resources you used to resolve it. Did it change you? If so, how?
Living with your mother and dad together is a great boon. Growing up with my family, my parents were always taking care of me, and I was the happiest person in the world. But life isn't always fair, when I entered my high school; my parents' problems have become more obvious and complex. They suddenly stopped talking to each other. I didn't know what was happening, but I thought it was a small dispute and everything will return the same, but that wasn't the case.
I remembered that day when my mother called my sister and I to her room, and told us the shocking truth, in a few weeks she will leave us to her parents' home she said that their problem became so complex and they will break up. I didn't expect this scenario happening even in my dreams, I felt disappointed, frustrated and kept my tears from falling, but my older sister was stronger than me, she understood the circumstance and kept herself calm and relaxed. After which, I lived the worst days in my life, I couldn't think about anything else, and while I was lost, my mother had gone.
My dad was working for long hours till midnight, so my sister and I were alone at home most time. I started to understand the situation, now I had to depend on myself on everything. My sister helped me to find myself and taught me important lessons; we forgot about our old life and made a new one. We cooperated to do the housekeeping and take care of ourselves, and now we have got used to all of that. Living without my parents benefited, and that fear disappeared forever. This situation taught me many things that I won't forget ever, and the most important thing that now I know how to deal with my problems.
My beliefs and view of life had changed a lot after that experience; I learnt how the life could be harsh sometimes. The idea of surrender was always going on in my mind, and I felt despair many times, but I keep pushing forward, all of that just strengthen me. Failure is the key for success, and being patient is the secret to solve problems. Now I have the power to face my difficulties, and became a person anyone could rely upon him.