Why i want to be a nurse ( Nursing School Admission Essay in 150 words )

It is not because of the smart looking white, blue or pink nurse uniform neither because of the salary that raising these last few years. I want a knowledge that can be use whenever or wherever I am as long I`m able to move and be any help to others. I want to be the best I can in a profession that i love, i like adventure and challenge because it`s motivate me and that`s when nursing profession came in my mind. This profession is full of adventure and thrills of it`s own, emotional and physical not to mention the extensive coverage of knowledge about humankind and life being.

I want to be useful for other people, there are peoples that`s having good time out there and celebrating it with others, but what about the sad moments and difficulty in their life? Theres times we cannot heal other sickness even if we try our best. I wish i can at least make a person smile while struggling with their sickness even for a moment so they can feel that they are still alive because I think it`s matter to them in facing their hardship.I love learning, thirst for knowledge and i will do my best to make a differences in peoples life in their good or sad moment.

I can picture myself nursing patients in 10, 15 even 20 years ahead of me and i believe this college will guide me develop as an individual and unlock my full potential through this nursing course.

Do u think its too long?

I want to be useful for other people, there are peoples that`s having good time out there and celebrating it with others, but what about the sad moments and difficulty in their life? (It is not a question, it is statement, do not use (?). And also it is very long make two simple sentences.

It is not because of the smart looking white, blue or pink nurse uniform, and it is not because of the salary that has been rising during these last few years.

...because it motivates me, and that's when the nursing profession came to mind.

This profession is full of adventure and thrills of it`s own, emotional and physical not to mention the extensive coverage of knowledge about humankind and life being life science.

There are times we cannot ...

I can picture myself nursing patients 10, 15 even 20 years in the future, and I believe this college will guide me to develop as an individual and unlock my full potential.

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