How are you and St. Olaf a good fit for each other? (100 words)

My future studies are certainly vital towards my lifetime goals and I believe St. Olaf would help me reach my destination. Discursive and argumentative platform that St. Olaf possesses would provide me opportunities to share ideas and viewpoints among professors and other students around the globe. Strong financial and scholarship provision that St. Olaf provides would aid me continue my studies without any financial difficulties. I want world class education in a diverse campus community and I believe St. Olaf will help me develop skills and abilities that I can take with me forever and thus contribute for the mankind.

Please let me know whether this supplement stands out. Any suggestions would be highly appreciated.

Hi Roshan.
Your writing is good. Your eagerness is described clearly in your writing. I guess you can explain benefit of your knowledge specifically after you study at St. Olaf. You might give a illustrate which can help other people.

Good luck Roshan.

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HI Roshan, I'd like to share my views on your supplement essay.

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There you have it Roshan, I changed a few words in your essay, this is the key to convey a strong appeal on this type

of essay, it's short, simple, precise and straight to the point. This suggestion will possibly boost the essay and take it to the next level.

I wish you good luck and do let is know what happens, we'd love to hear from you.